Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

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The computer is a superior advent of sophisticated modern technology and has it's own place and importance in everywhere

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as educational institutions, employment forms. Computers have a plethora of merits and demerits. In my opinion, I personally believe that the

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of computer overweight disadvantages.

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a logical conclusion. On the one hand, computers are very essential in schools because they provide the best and fast service in terms of everything

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

83 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Edutainment
Multimedia resources
E-learning platforms
Digital literacy
Cyberbullying
Ergonomic hazards
Cognitive overload
Technological proficiency
Blended learning environments
Instructional technology
Adaptive software
Screen time management

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some parents and teachers think that children’s behavior should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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