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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job

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Dear Sir and Madam, I recently came across your advertisement seeking a language teacher for your two children, and I would like to express my genuine interest in the position. With a background in linguistics and years of experience teaching languages to children of various age groups, I believe I am well-suited to assist your family. One of the reasons I feel particularly qualified for
this
 role is my adaptive teaching method, tailored to the unique learning styles of each student.
This
 ensures an engaging and effective learning experience, making the acquisition of a new language enjoyable and intuitive. I am fluent in English, and my understanding of both the cultural and grammatical aspects would offer your children a well-rounded education in the language.
In addition
 to teaching, I am more than happy to assist with other tasks that might be helpful to your family. Whether it’s helping with homework, engaging in creative play, or even aiding in meal preparation, I am adaptable and eager to become a positive addition to your household. My motivation for applying for
this
 job extends beyond
professional
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 interest. The opportunity to live in Australia and immerse myself in its rich culture is an appealing prospect.
Moreover
, the idea of contributing to your children’s education and becoming part of your family’s daily life is both exciting and fulfilling to me. I am confident that my passion for teaching and my ability to connect with young learners would make
this
 a rewarding experience for all of us. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of discussing
this
 opportunity
further
 with you. Sincerely, Jacob Brown.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea that aligns well with the overall purpose of your letter.
coherence cohesion
Keep working on your ability to create logically structured letters with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion that enhance readability and understanding.
task achievement
Consider developing your answers around the tasks more by including detailed examples or anecdotes to enrich your response and provide deeper insights into your qualifications and motivations.
coherence cohesion
You did an excellent job of maintaining a coherent structure throughout the letter, with each paragraph clearly devoted to a different aspect of the response.
task achievement
Your letter appropriately addresses all points mentioned in the prompt, demonstrating a strong understanding of the task requirements.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • TESOL certification
  • Experience in teaching children
  • Knowledge of Australian culture
  • Passion for language education
  • Flexible and adaptable
  • Design customized lesson plans
  • Patient and understanding
  • Strong communication skills
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Participate in family activities
  • Enthusiasm for cultural exchange
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