Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited. To what extent do you agree?

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It is believed that genetic manipulation tends to has been become a harmful movement and there is no need to
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modification. I completely disagree with
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argument because it offers important solutions to overcome problems in the field of medicine and agriculture.
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with, one of the major reasons is likely to receive positive responses by altering the genes in pharmaceutical drugs.
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is because many health problems which stem from gene problems directly
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as cystic fibrosis, which is caused by a defect in producing a protein in the respiratory system due to gene problem and it can be resolved with some sophisticated process. A recent treatment found for patients with cystic fibrosis is to inject some genes to induce the patient's body to generate that protein to control the symptoms of
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health issue.
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, genetic engineering plays a vital role in the treatment of diseases which is used to be incurable in past.
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, it can
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able to help in agriculture as well. The reason behind
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as the growing population of the world requires profitable cultivation and need more resistant plants. With the help of genetic engineering
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experts have been able to develop these plants to feed more people with less damage to nature.
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, a new modified generation of corn which is cultivated in Canada recently is more resistant to the majority of pests.
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they can be used in many countries which have faced pest problems. In conclusion,
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genetic engineering might have some downsides, I strongly believe that its benefits in medicine and agriculture do not support the decision to stop it.
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