Some people believe that studying at university or colleges is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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to achieve the desired vocation, but there is a strong counter-argument amongst sections of the people that said youngsters should join a venture direct after completing schooling. Use synonyms
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is a matter to be debated in light of several factors before a reasonable conclusion can be drawn.
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as a doctor, engineer, nurse etcetera required intensive knowledge in a certain field. To attain Linking Words
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as it includes theoretical as well as practical knowledge of subjects.The earlier hard work helps them to reap benefits later in life Use synonyms
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For example
, Software engineering has six months hand-on training to get the final degree which makes them able to work practically in their corporate companies.The Linking Words
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worth-mentioning the reason is that some jobs have strict criteria to apply for it Linking Words
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as civil jobs, engineering jobs, doctor jobs, Human resources jobs.Linking Words
For instance
, to acquire a position in human resource department of an MNC, one should have a master of business administration or in the same Linking Words
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to establish a hospital an individual must have a degree in doctorate.Use synonyms
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a symbol of respect as people always treat a person respectfully who have a higher position in eminent Linking Words
career
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On the contrary
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has had a positive aspect. Job after schooling help young individuals become able to support their family economically and pay for their own expenses, which leads to a higher sense of maturity, in dependability.Linking Words
Besides
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, some students who weak in studies are good in extra curriculum activities like sports, music. Linking Words
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they prefer to choose their hobby as a Linking Words
career
and live a better life as compared to highly skilled individuals. To illustrate, eminent Indian cricketer Sachin Tendulkar, who used to fail in exams during school days, has started his Use synonyms
career
just after completing schooling, now is famous for his batting records.
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choosing a Linking Words
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path has some benefits, but in today's era of competition getting a highly paid job after schooling is almost impossible. Use synonyms
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education
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make them able to attain a highly paid and lucrative job, which helps them to lead a financially stable life.Linking Words
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