Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today we live in a world
that is
full of all kinds of distractions one of them being
noise
. Some think that there should be an uncompromising control of
noise
, while there are
also
others who think that they are allowed to make as much
noise
without any restriction. In
this
discussion, we will thoroughly examine both points of view before drawing a reasoned conclusion. In order to do anything efficiently, it is really of the utmost importance to concentrate well.
For instance
, if someone at work is disturbed by the constant
noise
he will have a hard
time
to productively complete the task on
time
.
Consequently
, the task could be prolonged leading to a shortage of
time
for other important daily activities.
Therefore
, for working environments, it is mandatory to provide adequate control of the
noise
level
. Contrary, there is a group of people which consciously or nonconsciously don't pay attention to the current needs of other people around them meaning that they could produce
noise
in an uncontrolled manner.
For example
, a coworker being unaware that the colleague nearby is working on a hard problem could potentially start expressing himself loudly.
This
could bring a huge interruption in the work of others since they will be forced to stop at least for the moment. As a consequence, these kinds of situations could lead to
further
unrelated discussion and even conflict could emerge which is unnecessary and could be prevented if the aforementioned group of people is a little more attentive to others. To summarize, the
level
of
noise
is directly proportional to the
level
of concentration and productivity. That being said, in order to have a better quality of
time
, being it working hours or leisure
time
such
as recreational activities the
level
of
noise
should be strictly controlled.
Finally
, we saw that those who make
noise
around them are usually not aware of others, so one should not be harsh to them but equally eager to understand other side and help them realize that they should be more attentive to others.
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