Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Achieving an economic goal is the ultimate goal of most governments in the world. Some people,

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, insist that a nation has to develop in other areas as well. In my opinion, all the development are equally as important as economic development. The essay will discuss my stance with arguments in the below paragraphs.

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with, economic growth is crucial for the purpose of education, other needs and keeping it as their main purpose is the right decision of the government.

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, if the state lacks wage for the public service

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, it would become a huge problem and the citizens would blame the authority for it.

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, the health economy, for the people who cannot afford the bills of the hospitals, the bill is provided to them by the ministry so in case if the government cannot provide those service, many helpless people could die because of health issues and lack of money.

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, if the authority overlooks the other matters,

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, technology advancement, the country can never succeed in the latest development and new techniques and have to live the life the hard way.

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, the other reason

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agricultural growth, if the new way of farming is ignored

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it would affect the number of crops that grow, the soil

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irrigated and many more. To illustrate

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this

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can affect the food

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one of the important things in the persons living. To summarize, by having money the government can give secure life to their city, even to earn that they should start to improvise a various part but in my view, I agree with the opinion of the people who think that another growth-boosting is as important as economic progress.

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Topic Vocabulary:

standard of living
sustainable development
social equality
environmental degradation
cultural heritage
technological innovation
wealth disparity
human development index
holistic approach
quality of life
economic prosperity
healthcare system
education system
cultural diversity
policy decisions

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