Studies have shown that in many countries the income gap between the rich and poor is ever increasing. What problems can arise from this situation and what could be done to address this situation?

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Recent year studies show that the salary gap between affluent and poor has surged in the long run.
This
essay addresses the problem caused due to the above statement along with the solutions which will be effective for
this
issue.
To begin
with, there
are
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n
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umber of problems caused by
abudance
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abundance
discrimination, the
first
being, a feeling of envy arising in the minds of the poor people which tempts them to involve in crimes
such
as robbery or
burglarly
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burglary
to cover their own
life
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expenses.
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there is no opportunity for the poor to attend schools or to get a good hospital facility, as they won't be able to afford those bills.
As a result
of which the number of illiterates and cases of
illnessess
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illnesses
illness
increases dramatically over
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ast few years.
For example
, a case was reported six months ago stating a man who just turned 18 looted a house by murdering both family members of that house. The youth claimed that he did it to save his mother who was a cancer patient. In the other hand, there are many good solutions for
this
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problems. The government must ensure that each and
every one
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gets proper
education
despite their wealth status.The government can
rise
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fund for educating the poor class by implying taxes on the rich. Social organisations
also
do play an important role in reaching out
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lower class people in the rural areas which one hasn't even heard off and
also
supply them with all necessities required.
In addition
to
this
more and more similar organisations have to be established in all nations to make the poor feel capable to seek
education
, job,
opprtunities
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opportunities
and healthcare benefits.
For instance
, in India when a classmate notebook is purchased two rupees of the total amount is donated to a child for his or her
education
. A multitude of
such
programs must be started. In conclusion, the prosperity difference between the rich and poor
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been increasing as poor people couldn't attain proper
education
nor enjoy healthcare facilities as rich due to receiving low wages compared to the wealthy.
This
gap can be reduced by governments imposing tax policies on the well off .
Moreover
forming social organisations and keeping in touch with them regularly will make the nation capable of extending their aid to impoverished in different parts of the nation.
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