Some people think that history has nothing or little to tell us, but others believe that studying the past history can help us better understand the present.

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It is considered by some that past shouldn’t be taken into account because of the little benefit of it, whereas other oppose it, claiming that learning the historical actions in past times can help and teach us to better understand the world, present and future. From my point a view,
history
can be lead to good as well as bad constituencies to the human race. There is no doubt that people are teaching
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their own mistakes.
This
is means that during the study and reflection of our past, we might be prepared to avoid global problems in the future. We have been built by our faults.
For example
, the usage of the nuclear bomb on Hiroshima and Nagasaki cities thought us to be cautious with
such
type of weapon,
also
understand how it fully works. Apart from that, a lot of countries gave the signature to the renouncement of exploring the atomic power for bad things. Kazakhstan refused of owning the nuclear polygons and weapon in
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emipalatinsk region in 1991 and that means country wished a healthy and kind forthcoming for humanity.
Moreover
, we should know the
history
of our origin and nationality to educate the generation for patriotism sense.
However
,
on the contrary
, people always do mistakes and they don’t learn anything from the past and
such
actions of protecting the world and human race are just cover.
This
is mainly due to the fact that countries
such
as the US, Russia and China have big power of the atomic weapon, but don’t use them. The governments of these states that it is for protection the humanity, but how dangerous thing, which can destroy the Earth, could protect us? The states still have it to show to people and each other the power of themselves. If World War 3 will become,
then
all countries can direct the forces on others.
As a result
, there will not be a peaceful world. Another solid argument has to do with national identity and patriotism sense.
This
line of avenge for our ancestors and our past never ends, while the people will remember the
history
.
For example
, the war between Arab countries and Israel for the Palestine territory. The future generation will revenge for present people, who revenging for the past. To sum up, I personally agree, that
history
is vital for escaping the mistakes from past,
however
; I cannot deny that knowing our backward
also
could turn to bad actions.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • insights
  • progression
  • values
  • beliefs
  • heritage
  • identity
  • applicable
  • biased
  • subjective
  • practical
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