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With the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, writing a
letter
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 as a communication method has been gradually replaced by using digitalized devices
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 as sell-phone and lap-tops. While many
people
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 arguing the completely distinct of mail writing, I think there still remains space for
such
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 an old fashion way of linking
people
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. On the one hand, it is
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true
 true that decreasing
people
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 still post
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letter
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 because of its ineffectiveness in information transformation. Generally, it would take at least 2 days or even longer
deliver
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 the mail to its destination.
By contrast
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, the mobile phone can send messages within a
second
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though
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through
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 the internet. For some urgent information
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 as fire warming or medical suggestion, nothing is more valuable to deliver the contents as soon as possible. So time-consuming the mailing is one of the main reasons that
people
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 turn to use personal
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electronics
 electronics
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 of going to the post office.
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, the loss of shares in the newsletter for mail is determined.
On the other hand
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,
letter
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 writing is a unique method of building relationships between
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 that can
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hardy
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 be replaced.
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, the hand-writing
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 contain warmer and more touching feelings from the senders than those typing
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 on the screen.
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, those days that the
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traveled
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 made it become more precious when the receiver opens it. The pattern of writing
letters
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 has
tranferred
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transferred
 into a way of memorizing as well as creating intimate relations.
As a result
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, using phones and computers is a mainstream of sending messages thanks to the development of science and technology, the tradition of writing
letters
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 will still remain in our daily life.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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