In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?
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Consider organizing your essay with clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the topic. This will improve logical flow.
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Provide more detailed explanations or discussions to enhance the clarity of your ideas.
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While your examples are relevant, consider including more varied examples to support your points.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion.
task achievement
You provide a real-life example of how a bank was hacked in Bangladesh, which strengthens your argument about the distrust of cashless systems.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite