A long-distance flight consumes as much fuel as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon none essential flights and it is more efficient than restricting the car. To what extent do you agree or dis agree?

It is sometimes argued that unnecessary
air
travel
should be completely stopped
instead
of restricting
road
transport as both these modes of transport use the same amount of fuel and generates as much pollution.
This
essay disagrees that nonessential aeroplane
travel
needs to be banned.
Firstly
, people need to go to another country for tourism as most of the borders can’t be crossed by
road
and
secondly
,
air
travel
is a source of income for many in different ways .
To begin
with, humans are born to explore and going for some tours in a faraway country is a dream for all, but most of them are unable to achieve
this
due to various reasons,
such
as want of time, money or some family issues.
Hence
, these people cannot be
further
burdened with the restriction of none essential flights for tourism as international
travel
is more convenient by
air
rather than by
road
or sea, which might take days to reach the destination.
For example
, I live in southern India and if I want to go to see the Burj Khalifa in Dubai by
road
it would take me at least four days to cross India Pakistan border, whereas, by aeroplane,the journey would be in less than five hours. Another reason for my disagreement is a lot of public depends on income from
air
travel
and airports,
also
, it is a good source of revenue for governments. many individuals in the airline industry would lose their source of bread and butter if the flights are abandoned.
For example
, the Kingfisher airlines, which was once a major airline service provider in India vanished in a blink of an eye due to their cost-effective methods to save fuel and money and
therefore
thousands of its employees were on streets.  to conclude, I do not believe that tourist flights should be stopped from flying as it is a way of revenue for many people as well as a way to visit distant places.
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