The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The potential scientific effects lie at the heart of societal concerns. The most significant purpose of them should be to make the citizens'

lives

better. I completely agree with

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, and I will explain my reasons in

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essay. Using science

for improving

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the

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people

's

lives

should be the highest priority for every nation.

For example

, in the health care system,

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has had

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enormous advantages, like inventing the vaccinations and the medication for cancers.

Consequently

, the average years of living has been increasing.

This

number

has risen to 85 years old in the UK since 2015, which is twice as high as

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between 1990

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2005. The other thing that could

makes

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life easier is a great public transport system. The

number

of residents using buses or trains is soaring. Admittedly, by using science to invent an efficient system, which can address

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demands,

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societies would have happier residents.

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right way , that would result in a satisfied community.

On the other hand

, new technologies could have

dentrimental

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detrimental

effects on

people

's

lives

.

For instance

,

atomic

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bomb was invented by the very genius scientists,

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believing

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that

this

would stop

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wars.

However

,

this

outstanding invention not only has not helped

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people

to have a peaceful life, but

also

has killed a huge

number

of innocent folks, like children, women , and elderly ones. A report was released after

atomic

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attacks in

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Japan in 2002, mentioning that around one million

people

had

killed

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after that attack. So, if science is used in

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baleful ways, the consequences will be irreversible.

To sum up

, whether new inventions

is

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going to

use

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for improving or destroying

lives

is an important issue for every individual. I strongly agree that these inventions must dedicate to

build

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a great

live

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life

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for everyone.