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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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Museums are unique places where you get to experience history from the past to the latest technology.
However
,
admission
 is required when entering. Museums are popular places to go on a weekend with family or friends. Admissions are
one
 of the funds which keep the museum running and
also
 to maintain its exhibits. Without
admission
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museums would be dirty, poorly maintained, and likely impossible to operate, unless funded from government or charity.
However
,admissions are
one
 thing which may keep the customer from entering. Usually,we have to pay around $30 for admissions. Children or family which doesn’t earn much simply can not afford
this
 amount. They will go to the museum which is free or even not goes and experiences the greatness of the museum, which I think is horrible because it should be open for everyone. I think having an
admission
 is a disadvantage since museums should be open for everyone, but
admission
 is essential for running the museums. So I think it is very important to come up with a plan so that museums could be operated but
also
 be
admission
 free,
such
 as government funding or doing a charity. Auckland Museum is
one
 great example. It is
one
 of the biggest museums in New Zealand but it is
also
 free of
admission
 since it’s government-funded.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Admission fee
  • Revenue stream
  • Maintenance
  • Overcrowding
  • Commercialization
  • Cultural heritage
  • Diverse attendance
  • Community ownership
  • Access to culture
  • Visitor experience
  • Exhibit quality
  • Cultural mission
  • Reliance on funding
  • Government subsidies
  • Cultural accessibility
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