Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.

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Capital punishments are one of the cruellest punishments in the

world

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, whose use is a topic of a huge debate. Capital

punishment

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refers to the killing of a

person

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for a

crime

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that he or she performs. It is a widely used

punishment

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in many middle east countries to

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date. But elsewhere in the

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people are divided on there opinion whether capital

punishment

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should be used to make a

person

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pay for there

crime

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or not. On one side, there are people who believe that no matter how small or how big a

crime

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is, the value of human life is very important.

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person

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should be given any

punishment

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for his or her

crime

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but they should not be sentenced to capital

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, there are a few people who believe that no matter how bad a

crime

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performed by a

person

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is, everybody deserves a

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chance to improve in their lives, so they should not be subjected to capital punishments and should be given a fair

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chance to improve themselves. While on the other side, there are those who believe that people who perform extremely serious crimes

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as terrorist attacks, rapes, etc should be hanged to death or should be penalized with capital

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. In most of the countries around the

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, capital punishments are rarely used as they involve killing of the

person

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who performs the

crime

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. But there are still a few countries in the

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where people can be subjected to capital punishments if he or she performs a serious

crime

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. In my opinion, the use of capital

punishment

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should be used, but if and only if the

crime

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performed by the

person

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is extremely serious. Other than that capital

punishment

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should not be used.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

296 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.