A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Each year, universities decide on a
number
of graduates to
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the needs of the workforce. Some colleges think of equally accepting male and female students to study
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their campuses. I strongly agree with the previous statement. Nowadays, many girls are interested in continuing their higher education. The
number
of annual applicants is rising each year, with many women aspiring to attaining scholarships and studying in prestigious universities.
For example
, in Egypt, many females are choosing to study engineering and medical sciences, there is a competition on the
number
of places available between males and their
females
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counterparts.
As a result
, universities’ administrations should accept the same
number
of both genders in order to provide an equal opportunity for men and women. In many societies, women are underprivileged and are prohibited from completing their educational process. In
such
societies, their main role is limited to raising families. To illustrate, in
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rural areas in countries
such
as India and Egypt, many people consider that educating girls is not as important as teaching boys. If universities accepted both genders,
this
would greatly give many females hope to carry on their academic studies.
Consequently
, they will be given a chance to discover their passions and break free from all the entrenched beliefs that undermine their abilities and potentials. In conclusion, women play a crucial role in the ever-challenging workforce, they should be able to learn the set of skills which are learned in colleges, so as to contribute in the current job market and gain some self-confidence.
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