Improvements in health, education and trend are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibilities for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The basic needs of general people are the most required areas for attention by the government of any
country
. Although
these needs are not much fulfilled by poor countries, it should not be the responsibility of other good performing nations to help in all ways for the betterment and I disagree with the opinion.
Each of the nations of the world is capable of something, either by means through nature or artificial discoveries. Any country
in this
world has some identity for what it is and has the capability of performing better if things are mobilized with good managerial bodies. I strongly believe that the political individual or personnel who are concerned with c
ountry's betterment should look for potential areas of the Add an article
the
country
which needs to be improved and flourished. Only a single such
thing could benefit the country
as a whole which might bring up the economy and helps elevate basic needs of health and education. For example
, in the country
like Nepal, government officials stood up in 2019 quoting that Nepal could potentially flourish in the area of tourism, which gave flames to announce y
ear 2020 as "Visit Nepal 2020" to attract tourists and to welcome them devoting the whole year. Change the article
the
This
announcement has great potential in which people joins the campaign and the whole country
could benefit from it.
Good performing countries are somehow better in doing things that bad performing ones lack . In the case of a small country
like Nepal, many items such
as coffee beans, tea leaves, cloves etc are exported to performing countries in which they make it better with enhanced refinements. These items are exported back to Nepal and people here accept those materials being imported and makes them more valuable although
they're the ones which were initially
harvested in their own country
. The point is that the better-performing country
has the potential to enhance things which the country
like Nepal lacks. So, it is to be taken as a serious topic and mobilization of resources should be made to get maximum out of the country
's resources which finally
elevates the country
's economy and increases development process in the areas of proper health systems, education and everything goes with the trend.
In the nutshell, it is not the good performing countries should help the fewer ones but the least performing ones should know their potential and devote on to making change for the better attainment of problems they're facing.Submitted by Aashish Karki on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite