Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Currently,our world is facing a severe issue of environmental degradation as each day pass by.Some people believe that loss of the government must be well aware and must take strict initiatives against it is the responsibility of every single person in the world to consider
species
is the main reason behind the problem while others think the fact that there are more important environmental problems.
Firstly
There
are numerous reasons to support the former argument.The loss of a particular animal and plant Correct your spelling
there
species
could make an of impact in the ecological balance.Several aspects like deforestation and climatic change play a crucial in this
subject. Cutting down the forest makes a particular species
homeless and following this
reason many of them dare to come to the cities and streets in search of food and shelter.I think this
would be awfulAdd the comma(s)
,
However
,there are several Hunters behind some rare species
in order to make use of it as an export commodity.In such
casesAdd a comma
,
such
practices.
On the contrary
,I also
support the view that there are more important environmental issues. Global warming is one such
problem which is led by the combustion of fossil fuels and greenhouse gases.This
may affect everyone's lives.In addition
, unfavourable climatic conditions may affect the ecosystem badly that survival becomes more difficult. It is seen that many organisations around the world are putting their efforts to protect e
nvironment.Several national parks and botanical gardens contribute a major half in ensuring the safety of each organism and other individual initiatives like planting trees can Add an article
the
also
be put forward to improve such
problem.
In conclusion, as the guardian of natureAdd a comma
,
this
as a serious issue and look forward to a better environment.Submitted by aanetthomas03 on
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