Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it , should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
There is no doubt a wide variety of judiciary systems can be seen all over the world. penalty. While some advocate that
Althogh
there are some people Correct your spelling
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elieve that fixed punishments can be a solution, others think that circumstances and previous criminal history need to be taken into account before ordering penalty. In my opinion, I strongly support the latter viewpoint since it is reasonable.
On the one hand, the Add a pronoun
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supportors
of the fixed punishments argue that by Correct your spelling
supporters
implimenting
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implementing
this
system can have many advantages. Firstly
, this
can be a speedy process, since the judge can penalise the criminal based on the gravity of the offence. For example
, if anyone commits murder, in a fixed penalty system, the court can pronounce the verdict immediately. Therefore
, not only can the culprit be locked down, but the entire society will be saved for a certain extent
However
, despite of
the above-mentioned argument, the opponents think that the background of the law-breakers should be verified before Remove the preposition
apply
finilising
the verdict. Correct your spelling
finalising
finalizing
In other words
, there are many people c
ommit unlawful acts for self-defence and Add a pronoun
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similarly
, this
may be their first
law breaking
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law-breaking
However
, repeat offenders should be punished strictly than others, for instance
, drug trafickers
or killers are known the consequences since they had a jail term already. Correct your spelling
traffickers
Thus
, those who are manipulated and unknowingly engaged any criminal activities can be exempted from a heavy penlty
.
In conclusion, people have a different concept regarding how to fixCorrect your spelling
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ixed system of punishment is better, opponents argue various background information Add an article
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to be incorporated. I totally disagree with the former view since it is not democratic.Change the verb form
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