Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it , should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There is no doubt a wide variety of judiciary systems can be seen all over the world.

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elieve that fixed punishments can be a solution, others think that circumstances and previous criminal history need to be taken into account before ordering penalty. In my opinion, I strongly support the latter viewpoint since it is reasonable. On the one hand, the

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of the fixed punishments argue that by

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system can have many advantages.

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can be a speedy process, since the judge can penalise the criminal based on the gravity of the offence.

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, if anyone commits murder, in a fixed penalty system, the court can pronounce the verdict immediately.

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, not only can the culprit be locked down, but the entire society will be saved for a certain extent

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the above-mentioned argument, the opponents think that the background of the law-breakers should be verified before

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the verdict.

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, there are many people

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ommit unlawful acts for self-defence and

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.

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, repeat offenders should be punished strictly than others,

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, drug

trafickers

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or killers are known the consequences since they had a jail term already.

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, those who are manipulated and unknowingly engaged any criminal activities can be exempted from a heavy

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penalty

. In conclusion, people have a different concept regarding how to fix

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penalty. While some advocate that

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ixed system of punishment is better, opponents argue various background information

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to be incorporated. I totally disagree with the former view since it is not democratic.