These days too many people maintained that helped by relying on doctors and medicines rather than by following a healthy lifestyle.Do you agree or disagree?

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ealthcare sector are gaining more attention of people that they depend upon doctors and medicines for their healthy well-being. Most of them does not think of planning a healthy schedule. I do agree with
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rend will be discussed in the following essay. Nowadays,most people prefer to seek the advice of a doctor to solve the health-related problems they need doctors to prescribe some medicines as they help them in fast recovery.I do know
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,the intake of
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medicines beyond their prescribed dosage may cause other side effects or even fatal health conditions.
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,there is a similar incident which happened a few years back in my hometown.A patient suffering from high fever was injected with the wrong medicine by a well-experienced doctor.
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careless X cannot ensure the safety of people.
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, adopting new plans for a healthy lifestyle is definitely a good idea.
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, people can choose and follow a particular diet, adding more green vegetables and carbohydrate-rich foods as well as meat. Try to avoid fast foods as they could bring harmful effects on the body like high cholesterol and sugar levels,and obesity.
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to it,people should spend their little time in exercise in yoga will give a better result if followed on a regular basis
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will help to burn out unwanted calories and fax does
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plants will be really helpful in achieving a healthy life. In conclusion, people must not always depend upon medical treatments to cure their diseases.
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, try to follow a balanced diet and morning exercises like cycling and jogging in order to prevent the effect of disease and to maintain a healthy immune system as it is said that prevention is better than cure.
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