Some people prefer shopping in shopping centres while others prefer local markets. do you agree with this or not ?

it is refutable that ,in

this

modern era shopping plays a crucial role in every person

life

.A certain segment of society believes that

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big shopping mall should be converted into the small local trades in cities and town. I completely disagree with

this

statement. I will delve the point in upcoming paragraphs before reach the conclusion.

to begin

with ,the shopping malls provide a lot of benefits to the individual for their better

life

. owing to, the hectic

life

schedule time is very important for everyone. so, Malls help the individuals for their time save, people can purchase the grocery, clothes, books and decoration decorating things under the one roof.

secondly

,shopping malls help to reduce the unemployment rate

that is

good for people and

also

for the nation.

for instance

, due to, couple of shops in the mall's shopkeepers need servant for their shops, so they provide an opportunity to the people for

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ob. not only

this

, malls always enhance the beauty of the country and

also

cities and towns.

furthermore

, local trades

also

play a vital role in an individuals

life

. the shop owner does not need to spend the amount of money on shop opening , the person needs a small area some people like to buy their needy things from shops . to illustrate, every person is not rich in every nation ,which people are living in slums, villages and small towns they always like to purchase the things from local shops .

thus

, local shops have their own importance. in conclusion, local trade is good for everyone

that is

important.

however

, the shopping mall should not be converted in small shops that would affect the economic status due to attraction tourism

also

come there.