In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
As shopping centres grow in number, and popularity among shoppers, many local stores face closure. I believe
this
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There are two main benefits of purchasing at larger centres. Linking Words
For instance
, larger stores often provide perks for its loyal customers Linking Words
such
as outstanding discounts to incentive regular purchases. Linking Words
In addition
, they often provide a wide variety of product options and exclusive pre-sale deals when a new product is launched, Linking Words
for example
, Air Jordan Nike sneakers. Linking Words
As a result
, many people are extremely satisfied with the service provided at larger centres as well as with the exclusive convenience.
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For example
, many parents are thrilled to have the opportunity to multitask by purchasing needed items, paying bills and spending quality time with their children in the movies or in a cafe. Linking Words
Additionally
, the increasing demand for service at bigger facilities allows for the creation of jobs as more businesses open to serve clients. Linking Words
Therefore
, it turns out to be a win-win situation where clients enjoy their experience and different sectors of the economy have a positive development.
In conclusion, I believe that the benefits of shifting towards larger malls far outweigh the disadvantages. Governmental institutions, in my opinion, should provide a monetary incentive to entrepreneurs who wish to open a retail business in a mall as a mean of heating the economy.Linking Words
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