Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, -introduce yourself -say why are you interested in this sports club -ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, membership, costs etc. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my willingness to join your Endless Fitness

Club

adjacent to the Hilton Mall. I am Jacob, a resident of William Street colony, backside The Hilton Mall. Since I was at the mall for groceries, I found a pamphlet regarding your

club

According to

the pictures and data in

this

pamphlet, I am highly interested in joining it and especially the swimming area caught my attention.

Further

, I am a national player in badminton and swimming so I have some questions regarding these games, which are available in your

club

. Primarily, how many courts are there for badminton and whether the rackets are from the

club

or not.

Apart from

this

, let me know the cleaning process of swimming pool water and safety procedures.

Lastly

, it would be a great help if you tell me about the current offers on purchasing the membership for three months

along with

a freezing facility. I hope you will reply to me at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Jacob Brown.

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coherence cohesion

Combine similar questions into one paragraph to enhance flow.

task achievement

Perhaps mention any previous experience with other sports clubs to strengthen your interest.

coherence cohesion

Clear introduction and conclusion;

task achievement

Polite and formal tone throughout the letter.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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