Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, -introduce yourself -say why are you interested in this sports club -ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, membership, costs etc. Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my willingness to join your Endless Fitness Club
adjacent to the Hilton Mall.
I am Jacob, a resident of William Street colony, backside The Hilton Mall. Since I was at the mall for groceries, I found a pamphlet regarding your club
. According to
the pictures and data in this
pamphlet, I am highly interested in joining it and especially the swimming area caught my attention.
Further
, I am a national player in badminton and swimming so I have some questions regarding these games, which are available in your club
. Primarily, how many courts are there for badminton and whether the rackets are from the club
or not. Apart from
this
, let me know the cleaning process of swimming pool water and safety procedures. Lastly
, it would be a great help if you tell me about the current offers on purchasing the membership for three months along with
a freezing facility.
I hope you will reply to me at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Jacob Brown.Submitted by Mrjit147 on
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Perhaps mention any previous experience with other sports clubs to strengthen your interest.
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Clear introduction and conclusion;
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Polite and formal tone throughout the letter.