Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, -introduce yourself -say why are you interested in this sports club -ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, membership, costs etc. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my willingness to join your Endless Fitness

Club

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adjacent to the Hilton Mall. I am Jacob, a resident of William Street colony, backside The Hilton Mall. Since I was at the mall for groceries, I found a pamphlet regarding your

club

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According to

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the pictures and data in

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pamphlet, I am highly interested in joining it and especially the swimming area caught my attention.

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, I am a national player in badminton and swimming so I have some questions regarding these games, which are available in your

club

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. Primarily, how many courts are there for badminton and whether the rackets are from the

club

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or not.

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this

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, let me know the cleaning process of swimming pool water and safety procedures.

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, it would be a great help if you tell me about the current offers on purchasing the membership for three months

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a freezing facility. I hope you will reply to me at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Jacob Brown.

Mrjit147Fri Jun 14 2024

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coherence cohesion

Combine similar questions into one paragraph to enhance flow.

task achievement

Perhaps mention any previous experience with other sports clubs to strengthen your interest.

coherence cohesion

Clear introduction and conclusion;

task achievement

Polite and formal tone throughout the letter.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, -introduce yourself -say why are you interested in this sports club -ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, membership, costs etc. Write at least 150 words.

Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages o f taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

in many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue can be solved?

Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause in society?