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Question: in the future, no body will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Introspectively, it is believed that individuals will no longer be interested in hard copies of newspaper or books but rather rely on the cyberspace for any info they need at no cost. In my opinion,I strongly disagree with
this
 notion because of the natural desires of the reader and
also
, the high cost of internet bundles.
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 I disagree that printed materials will go into extinction because of the internet is
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 the net is not free. Some of
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 internet plans are very costly and some individuals are made to pay a price before they can gain access to
such
 sites.
This
 is relatively costly as compared to the price of paper.
For example
, in Nigeria, the cheapest data plan which will be sufficient for cyberspace package and downloading of information is over 1000 naira , which barely lasts for some few days as compared to books or
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 that are very affordable. Sometimes, old or used books are sold for a far
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cheaper rate.
Thus
 ,
this
 will present the disappearance of papers . Another reason is that the natural likeness for a hard copy will prevent
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 from fading out. Some persons are addicted to hard copies other than screens. The smell of the
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,pads ,novels and the joy derived from flipping through pages cannot be
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. To illustrate,many older adults always prefer to read the dailies rather than fishing out information on their phones or laptops, which could be very difficult and tiring.
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 many individuals will continue to purchase printed novels in the future because of their strong feelings for
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aper copy. In conclusion, the probability of printed novels and magazines exterminating in the near future due to people getting free information online is debatable,
however
, firmly do not support
this
 view because
firstly
, online sources are expensive and
secondly
 due to the
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 reading culture of most individuals thereby preventing the fading out of print outs in the future.
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