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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

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The trend of studying abroad is increasing significantly in the
last
 decade. Obviously, the reasons are endless but it is a debatable topic among people. Definitely, there are some students' personal as well as the provincial's profit, while students go to study abroad.
However
,
this
 tendency has some negative impacts too.
This
 essay will discuss the personal and nation's advantages along with some drawbacks. There are some obvious advantages for both the students and their home countries.
Firstly
, getting the opportunity to experience higher quality workshops, equipment, study materials, teaching assistance for the young fellows.
Secondly
, Youths may get to share their cultural differences for a global vision.
Finally
, after graduating, the students return to their home country with better training and/or education.
For instance
, democracy gets its own well-trained or specialist youths.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages too. One is that the expenses are enormous for foreign studies. Sometimes, due to lack of money, some bright students can not afford it. Another drawback is that sometimes these young fellows do not want to return to their homey as they get some more facilities in the studying union.
For example
, the mother country losses its bright youth. To recapitulate, it is recommended that, international study is equally important for the student along with the nation as
this
 tendency shows a positive gain on developed agrarian's education and economy system either by achieving good scholars or specialists. Though it has some disadvantages as
this
 trend is mostly for rich people but knowledge is a fundamental strength of human being and can not depend on the global barrier.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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