Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,

music

has been part of people's lives, and it can be

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heard

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every where

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. While some people

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reckon

that it has great effects on both individuals and societies, others believe that it has only a negative impact on both. From my point of view,

music

has many aspects, and its merits

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outweigh

its demerits.

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essay will discuss both arguments, along with my opinion. On the one hand,

music

can bring

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wealth

and fame for individuals, as well as playing

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ital role in

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spreading

culture

to the world.

Although

it is not a practical major,

musisians

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musicians

earn a huge amount of money.

furthermore

, they have enjoyed the life of travel and

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wealthiness

. Not only they have expressed their emotional feelings, but

also

they have been part of sharing their

culture

with the globe.

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, the

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Opera

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musician

Omar KHairet has played a crucial role in

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art and has known as a

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symbol

for its

culture

around the world.

On the other hand

,

music

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could be a source of

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for offsprings who are

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famous individuals on the

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field

.

Therefore

, they could find it an easy way to create a path or a career without considering other majors.

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trend has

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a negative impact on

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society

as they

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underestimate

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other sectors of society. A prime

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of

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the great amount of money spent on parties and concerts which can be transformed

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good service or in

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ducation sector. In conclusion, having presented the ideas above, it can be stated that

music

has advantages and

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. I want to reiterate my stance that if people

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utilize

it on the right

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, it could be a cure for the sole and a resource for the

culture

as well.