Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to help with environment projects in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: Describe a local environmental issue that affects you Explain what you would like to do to help Suggest how the problem could be avoided in future.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to an advertisement in the local newspaper calling for everyone to join environmental protection projects in the area. A serious environmental problem in my area is littering, especially plastic bottles and bags on the beach. Littering makes the environment unclear and unsafe. I would like to help by participating in community cleanup activities,

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announcement to everyone . We should educate everyone about environmental protection. I hope you will consider my solution. I look forward to your reply. Sincerely, Mr.Tien

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Dec 26, 2025

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Task response: You answer all parts, but your ideas are short. Add one more clear detail for each point.

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Task response: Some words are not clear, like 'environment unclear'. Use simple clear words, for example 'dirty' or 'harmful'.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your letter has a clear start and end, but some sentences do not join well. Use words like 'also', 'because', and 'so'.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Keep one main idea in each part. For example, one part for the problem, one part for your help, and one part for the future.

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Task response: You cover the three bullet points in the task.

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Task response: Your tone is polite and right for a letter to a manager.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your letter has a clear greeting and closing.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The order of ideas is easy to follow.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

110 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rubbish
litter
dirty
clean-up
recycling
bins
local area
bad smell
protect nature
community
volunteer
river bank
public park
waste
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