Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What are the problems associated with this? What solutions can you suggest ?

Everybody pursues a better

lifestyle

in their

live

Replace the word

life

show examples

. Obviously, today’s generations work

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

computer related

Add a hyphen

computer-related

show examples

and they are attached with the electronic device for most of the times. The new trend has some cons and some suggested solutions.

This

essay will emphasize

on

Verify preposition usage

apply

show examples

the problem of current

lifestyle

along with describes some possible solutions. There are endless negative impacts of

this

desk oriented

lifestyle

.

Firstly

, over-weight; due to less

walk in

Add a hyphen

walk-in

show examples

work-place individuals are gaining the weight.

This

body condition leads to several vital

disease

Change to a plural noun

diseases

show examples

in near future.

For example

, a young employee died recently due to heart disease which occurred due to over-weight body condition.

Secondly

, eye disorder; by looking at the screen continuous employees are getting eye problem more often. Eye dryness alone with eye pain

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

the

Change the article

a

show examples

common example of

this

.

Finally

, the attitude problem, like rough attitude, rude

behavior

Change the spelling

behaviour

show examples

and less concentration

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

the

Remove the article

apply

show examples

one of the

cause

Change to a plural noun

causes

show examples

of

this

unhealthy

lifestyle

. Now the solution, there are few recommendations which I can suggest. Mainly Government and organizations

involvement

Replace the word

involved

show examples

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

most important.

Government

Add an article

The government

show examples

can introduce a new tax benefit if an individual spent

w

Add an article

a

show examples

ell amount of time in

g

Add an article

the

show examples

ym.

Moreover

,

o

Add an article

an

the

show examples

rganization can impose a rule to utilize

g

Add an article

the

show examples

ym regularly.

For example

, recently

a news

Remove the article

news

a piece of news

show examples

mentions a well-know organization offers a good amount

Verify preposition usage

of

show examples

bonus for there employee who

utilize

Change the verb form

utilizes

show examples

gym

facilities.

On the other hand

,

g

Add an article

the

a

show examples

ym can promote via offering a gift card or some food coupons for their members which may be helpful.

Furthermore

,

p

Add an article

the

a

show examples

ublic campaign might

also

be helpful in

this

situation. In conclusion, we are living our life dangerously as our health condition becoming worst

everyday

Replace the word

every day

show examples

. It would be our responsibilities to make our life good and active by any terms. Implementing recommendations or steps may not

be fulfill

Change the verb form

be fulfilled

show examples

if we can not make it work in the right way.