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Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What are the problems associated with this? What solutions can you suggest ?

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Everybody pursues a better
lifestyle
 in their
live
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. Obviously, today’s generations work
are
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computer related
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 and they are attached with the electronic device for most of the times. The new trend has some cons and some suggested solutions.
This
 essay will emphasize
on
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the problem of current
lifestyle
 along with describes some possible solutions. There are endless negative impacts of
this
 desk oriented
lifestyle
.
Firstly
, over-weight; due to less
walk in
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 work-place individuals are gaining the weight.
This
 body condition leads to several vital
disease
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 in near future.
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, a young employee died recently due to heart disease which occurred due to over-weight body condition.
Secondly
, eye disorder; by looking at the screen continuous employees are getting eye problem more often. Eye dryness alone with eye pain
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the
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 common example of
this
.
Finally
, the attitude problem, like rough attitude, rude
behavior
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 and less concentration
are
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the
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one of the
cause
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 of
this
 unhealthy
lifestyle
. Now the solution, there are few recommendations which I can suggest. Mainly Government and organizations
involvement
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are
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 most important.
Government
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 can introduce a new tax benefit if an individual spent
w
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ell amount of time in
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ym.
Moreover
,
o
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an
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rganization can impose a rule to utilize
g
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ym regularly.
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, recently
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 mentions a well-know organization offers a good amount
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bonus for there employee who
utilize
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gym
 facilities.
On the other hand
,
g
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ym can promote via offering a gift card or some food coupons for their members which may be helpful.
Furthermore
,
p
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ublic campaign might
also
 be helpful in
this
 situation. In conclusion, we are living our life dangerously as our health condition becoming worst
everyday
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. It would be our responsibilities to make our life good and active by any terms. Implementing recommendations or steps may not
be fulfill
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 if we can not make it work in the right way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • physical inactivity
  • health problems
  • weight gain
  • obesity
  • energy levels
  • chronic illnesses
  • mental health
  • productivity
  • focus
  • social isolation
  • exercise
  • physical fitness
  • active lifestyle
  • health benefits
  • physical health
  • mental well-being
  • leisure activities
  • regular physical activity
  • physical exercise
  • cardiovascular health
  • strength training
  • flexibility
  • endurance
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