Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a very common belief that , an individual's success depends on their luck in most of the cases.I completely disagree with
this
statement,because someone's achievement is the result of their
hardwork
and determination.
Firstly
,
hardwork
is a key factors which determines a
person
's success rate.
In other words
,a
person
will be able to reach their goals,if and only if they spend a decent amount of time for it and work on it.
This
shows how much a
person
is keen to achieve their aim and wheather they deserve that reward.
That is
clear by an old adage which is : "No pain no gain".Thomas Alva Edison,
for instance
is a great example of
hardwork
.He was not good in his academics but was able to invent the electric bulb,eventhough he failed a 1000 times.Edison worked hard on his mistakes , which he committed over and over again.
Secondly
,strong determination
also
plays a pivotal role in a
person
's achievement.
That is
they must lead a goal-oriented life.
Instead
of trying their luck , or waiting for their fortune to blossom,they must have focus on their goals.Which is,if our mind is determined on something , nobody can stop us.The great writer Paulo Coelho quotes:"When you want something all the universe conspires in helping you acheive it." In conclusion , admittedly luck can sometimes be a reason for someone's success like in, winning a lottery , but in my perspective target can only be acheived by
hardwork
and strong determination.
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