Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is often said " speed thrills, grills, but kills ".
This
is a very true statement and its true meaning can be understood if we consider the case of extreme sports. People these days think that extreme sports such
as sky
diving and skiing are very risky and dangerous, and so, they should be banned. I firmly agree with this
view, and in this
essay, I will provide arguments in order to back my opinion.
With the advent of air travel, tourism has become one of the most sought after industries in the world. One of the most popular choice among tourists is to go to hill stations and resorts which are best known for extreme sports. These sports include skiing, sky
diving and much more. But what they do not realise is that these sports can be full of risks, which sometimes can even lead to death. For instance
, while skiing, a person needs to make sure not to attain a large velocity as that can increase the difficulty to stop in case of any emergency. Also
, there can be instances, when it's possible that the ice is not strong enough, leading to the formation of a hole. In many cases, these hole's may not be visible, increasing the possibility of a person falling into one of them, which sometimes, can lead to injuries that could take an individual's life. The same thing can happen if the ice has melted due to sun exposure. In addition
to all this
, there are many risks which come with sky
diving as well. For example
, many cases have been recorded in which turbulent atmospheric conditions have caused accidents. Sometimes, these accidents have injured people so badly, that they either die at that very moment or on their way to the hospital. Also
, these accidents can occur if p
oor quality of life-saving kits is used. These are just a few of the many examples which go on to show that extreme sports are full of risks.
So in a nutshell, extreme sports Add an article
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such
as skiing and sky
diving are very dangerous. Therefore
, in my opinion, these sports should be banned.Submitted by patelmunj2011 on
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