In many places, new houses are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
There are many places that need to build a new house, but unfortunately, there is a lack of space for building them .
However
, there is available space in the rural Linking Words
areas
. Certain individuals believe that in today's world, we have to protect the Use synonyms
countryside
and they shouldn't build new homes.
On the one hand , The 21st century has witnessed phenomena Use synonyms
such
as the IT revolution and globalization because of the internet and digital technologies. In other words, world development especially in the Linking Words
cities
, so the majority of Use synonyms
people
prefer to live in the Use synonyms
cities
rather than rural Use synonyms
areas
. Use synonyms
For example
, what is available in the Linking Words
cities
is not available in the Use synonyms
countryside
in fact rural Use synonyms
areas
lack electricity and lack of infrastructure . Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Life in the Linking Words
countryside
is a little difficult compared to life in the Use synonyms
cities
, especially from the work side.
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On the other hand
, there are many advantages to living in the Linking Words
countryside
. Use synonyms
People
who live in the Use synonyms
countryside
are healthier and happier. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
people
eat more vegetables and fruits Use synonyms
moreover
, it is fresh and clean. In rural Linking Words
areas
life is simple and there are no pollution and traffic jams. Use synonyms
People
work in agriculture . Use synonyms
For instance
, some Linking Words
people
on their vacation prefer to spend more time in a quiet place so , they decide to go to the Use synonyms
countryside
to spend time with their family and enjoy the fresh air.
In conclusion , I believe Today's world requires living in Use synonyms
cities
, which brings development and progress. Use synonyms
although
there are many advantages that attract Linking Words
people
to live in the Use synonyms
countryside
.Use synonyms
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