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Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Some scientists believe that the messages send into
space
 to communicate with other life forms, so they said it should be allowed.
However
, others said
this
 is too dangerous. On the hand, some scientists think humans merits that it should be allowed to send messages into
space
 to communicate with aliens. Because of the belief that we are not alone in
space
.
Space
 has unlimited
space
.
Also
, keep going to send messages into
space
 to communicate with aliens. Humans will get many new technologies and develop a new product to find other life forms.
On the other hand
, it is to contact with alien too dangerous. Because humans do not know anything about other life forms. unknown is included as dangerous.
Also
, I agree with
this
 view, because humans already have many problems
such
 as poverty, extend lifetime, environment and everything for survival. It does not right in
this
 situation. We should solve facing problem
first
.
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