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NOWADAYS MANY PEOPLE CHOOSE TO BE SELF-EMPLOYED.RATHER THAN TO WORK FOR A COMPANY OR ORGANIZATION. WHY MIGHT THIS BE THE CASE? WHAT COULD BE THE DISADVANTAGES OF BEING SELF-EMPLOYED?

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We are living in a world that
self-employment
 is a recent phenomenon
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especially in developed countries.People have an inclination to
work
 for themselves
instead
 of working for other parties.I will outline not only possible reasons
of
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this
 situation but
also
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isadvantages of it in the meantime. There are many factors which lead people to
self-employment
.
First
 of all, workloads which are put on people by their employers can be counted as a reason. Especially, in big companies, employees are working so hard in order to win market competitions.Following
this
,
w
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ork environment which is full of ambitious people can be unhealthy for people.Because constant race between them may cause psychological problems
such
 as anxiety and stress.
Secondly
, recent advancements in technology may be the reason for
self-employment
.
As
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artifical
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artificial
 intelligence like computers help people to manage their own business.Take e-commerce as an example.By working from home, people are able to sell their products and ideas through
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nternet.
On the other hand
, there are disadvantages which may be encountered when people run their own works.
Initially
, people have to deal with all problems which are related to their jobs by themselves.They carry full responsibility and
as a result
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it can be soul-consuming.
In addition
, it may be risky in terms of
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conomic approach.Because all expenses have to be paid without any support or fund. In conclusion, people prefer to
work
 for themselves because toxic
work
 environment and rush in
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 lead people
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eave their works.
In addition
, thanks to modern technologies, people have a chance to
work
 by themselves.Despite some disadvantages which I mention above , I am
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roponent of the
self-employment
.
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  • self-employed
  • company
  • organization
  • freedom
  • independence
  • income potential
  • flexibility
  • working hours
  • working location
  • passions
  • interests
  • decision-making
  • business practices
  • disadvantages
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