NOWADAYS MANY PEOPLE CHOOSE TO BE SELF-EMPLOYED.RATHER THAN TO WORK FOR A COMPANY OR ORGANIZATION. WHY MIGHT THIS BE THE CASE? WHAT COULD BE THE DISADVANTAGES OF BEING SELF-EMPLOYED?

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especially in developed countries.People have an inclination to

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for themselves

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of working for other parties.I will outline not only possible reasons

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isadvantages of it in the meantime. There are many factors which lead people to

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of all, workloads which are put on people by their employers can be counted as a reason. Especially, in big companies, employees are working so hard in order to win market competitions.Following

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ork environment which is full of ambitious people can be unhealthy for people.Because constant race between them may cause psychological problems

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as anxiety and stress.

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, recent advancements in technology may be the reason for

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intelligence like computers help people to manage their own business.Take e-commerce as an example.By working from home, people are able to sell their products and ideas through

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, there are disadvantages which may be encountered when people run their own works.

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, people have to deal with all problems which are related to their jobs by themselves.They carry full responsibility and

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it can be soul-consuming.

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, it may be risky in terms of

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conomic approach.Because all expenses have to be paid without any support or fund. In conclusion, people prefer to

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for themselves because toxic

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lead people

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eave their works.

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, thanks to modern technologies, people have a chance to

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by themselves.Despite some disadvantages which I mention above , I am

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roponent of the

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