Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.

The line graph illustrates the numbers of those who travel by
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subway within a day in London. Overall, it can be seen that early in the morning and at 16:00 o'clock the
number
of passengers is the lowest, whereas figures of travelers by metro reach at their peak at 8 am and 6
pm
. According to the data of the line graph, it can be noticed that the
number
of passengers bottomed at 6 am, while during 2-hour period the
number
of passengers becomes 4 times higher than at 6 am and reaches 400.
However
, after 8 am figures sharply decrease and become more than twice lesser than 2 hours before.
Furthermore
, figures are modestly climbing until 14:00 o'clock.
By contrast
, after 2
pm
numbers of passengers are significantly decreasing until 4
pm
and reach only 100 passengers, which is the lowest figure.
However
, after 16:00 the
number
of people in underground station rapidly grows and reaches slightly below 400 passengers.
Moreover
, after the peak time at 6pm, figures until 20
pm
considerably decrease to approximately 125,
then
slightly climb to just over 150 and
finally
reach just under 150 in the end of the working day
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • poverty alleviation
  • economic inequality
  • developing nations
  • foreign aid
  • sustainable growth
  • technical assistance
  • expertise
  • infrastructure
  • education
  • fair trade
  • trade barriers
  • sustainable development
  • environmental conservation
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