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Shops should give preference to selling local foods rather than imported foods. Do you agree or disagree?

#shops #foods
In
this
 new era, so many big
food
 markets opened by humans sp they can shop easily but they more preference to sell imported
food
. If small shops sell local
food
then
 its a good for so many other people who only prefer to eat their own cultural
food
. I agree with
this
 statement and elaborate
further
.
To begin
 with, the shops are good and easy to find for those people who are disabled or cannot walk or talk properly because it is easy for them to find their local
food
 in
s
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hort time period.
Moreover
, its help to make strong community power to sell their own
country
 products.
Secondly
, imported
food
 is always expensive because of their taxes and another duty
for instance
, if any big market selling imported
food
 like African black kidney beans or special rice and
then
 government put heavy taxes on it so that makes difficult for normal people to buy those products.
Furthermore
, selling
country
food
 product in shops or
super markets
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 rather than imported
food
, it will beneficial for
country
 farmers because if pupil buys local
food
then
 local farmers cultivate more products own their
country
 land and that makes good income source for them
for example
, the Canadian farmers mostly make money in
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ummertime rather than in winters because it is easier for them to cultivate different varieties of
food
otherwise
 they cannot produce anything in winters and they cannot make money too. So if shops or supermarkets sell local products
then
 it easier for those people who only earn in-sessional time. In the nutshell, buying or selling different varieties of
food
 help to big companies to produce a lot but if buy or sell not only imported but local
food
 too
then
 no doubt people will buy that product they
also
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ew generation to accept their
country
food
.
Submitted by Simranjeet Singh on

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