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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people hold the belief that there is no sense for high
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 students to be learned
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for instance
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 poems or novels. In my point of view, it mainly depends on the sphere about which a student is going to study in the future,
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, I personally think that it is important to learn the basics of the
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 in order to be generally clever.
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 with, the
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 is a significant subject for the students.
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 of all, various books, novels and poems are important because of their plot and educational factors.
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, reading these books students may get valuable knowledge and interesting facts about an individual book.
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, when I was in the high
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 I read a historical book, which had a huge influence on me, though it was quite long and demanded a great amount of time,
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, I found it motivational and thrilling.
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, some people may find it a waste of time and suggest not to teach
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 subject at the high
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, because those who are under the burden of the high
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 program may not manage to soak up the knowledge.
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, for those who continue their study with a sphere where
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 is not necessary their
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 program can be reduced and be taught only basics, as
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 gives valuable knowledge to everyone. Having said that,
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 teaches about each nations art, culture and history which are paramount for everyone to know. To sum up, I want to mention that
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 and books are of significant importance and
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 subject should undoubtedly be taught for high
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 students,
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 the teaching program and curriculum should be reduced and there is a necessity to teach only basics for those whom
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 is not necessary for a career.
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