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Parents should take courses in parenting in order to improve the lives of their children. To what extent do you agree?

#parents #courses #lives #children
People who
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 children take care
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their children and
also
envolve
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involve
 children's lives.I absolutely agree
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this
 opinion.There are a lot of
couses
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courses
causes
 in here why parents take courses in parenting in order to develop their children's lives.
Firstly
,sometimes,both of parents have not any time to educate their children.In
this
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parents should take courses their children,because,education is important that children would
be improve
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.
For example
,if children educate well,they will become
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necessary
n
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ecessery person
on
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 future.
Second
, kindergartens, schools, courses are good places where children are educated in there.Teachers,psychologists take care of them.One clear example is teachers take interest
of
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 their eating,drinking,sleeping in kindergarten,
although
 they teach new stories,poems and a lot of
intelectual
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intellectual
 games.
On the other hand
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this
 opinion has bad aspects.Children spend time with their parents less. To sum up it is observed that some children
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 their mother and father lesser.İt is complicate family relationships. In conclusion,despite some negative effects ,I agree parents must take courses in parenting in order to
envolve
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involve
evolve
 the lives of their children.
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