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All over the world, people watch foreign films much more than locally produced films. Why?

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Introduction
In many countries, especially in developing countries
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foreign movies are more popular than the locally made films. In my opinion, there are several reasons for
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 trend and the government should greatly contribute to promoting domestic movies.
Body paragraph 1
There are numerous causes of
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 problem.
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 and foremost, foreign films are often invested in larger amounts
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money
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 as the facilities is very cutting-edge, visual audio effects, which leads to
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 higher quality, namely acoustic and cinematographic effects.
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,
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oreign
film
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 will grab the attraction of viewers and audience.
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 can be exemplified by Endgame, which is famous for its advance visual, in the world highest-grossing
film
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. Not only does
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film
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 investing some advanced technology, but it
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 may have extensive promotion and famous actor’s participation. It is
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dvertising strategy, giving rise to attract the attention of everyone and impetus the sales of each
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.
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, Korea
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 of having to invest money giant festivals, they often put it into films to promote tradition and the movies are given audiences access to cultural values.
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, foreign films are
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 more and more popular due to the curiosity of everyone. Foreign culture arouses the public’s interests each individual to learn, follow and enrich cultural understanding.
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In response to
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 a problem, the government should be financial support. It is
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ecessity that leads to produce higher quality
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 and absorb to local viewers.
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, when the authority provides money in domestic films, there will be ample job opportunities for amateur actors and depending
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their insight into the country culture.
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, the governments should promote national identity,
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 will apple more tourists and attribute to boost
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ourism industry.
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, in September 2008, CNN rated “When the tenth month comes”, a Vietnamese classic, as one of 18 excellent Asian films of all time, which attracts a variety of tourists to.
Conclusion
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uriosity of people and high-quality films are two main reasons why foreign films are popular. The government should help
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ocal
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 industry to develop since it could positively affect the economy.

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