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Young people say that travelling to different countries benefits them and the society. Do you agree or disagree. Give your opinion

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In
this
 modern era, globetrotting among young generations become more popular from time to time. It is
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undebatable
debatable
 that
this
 trend of travelling in
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ositive influence on both societies as well as
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outh population. I strongly concur with
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 ideology and
also
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 my viewpoint in the following paragraphs. To commence with, there are many
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 tourism that provide benefits among youth.
Firstly
, there are numerous educational and job
opportunites
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opportunities
 to the students in the various parts of the world.
This
 development is helpful for their career growth or even they can pursue their avocations. To elucidate,
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in spite
 of choosing professional jobs
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hysician, engineer or lawyer ,they can doctorate in skilled trades
such
 as chefs, photographers,
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lectrician with their best interest .
Moreover
, in my viewpoint, while travelling in foreign countries, adults come across
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ide variety of cultural exchange that
also
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that is
also
 a great achievement.
Further
 reinforcing my viewpoint,
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oyage has greater influence among societies all over the world.
Initially
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ourism industry provides wages to hundreds of thousands of people ergo to rapidly rise in
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lobal journey by the hoards of people.
For instance
, 15% of
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opulation in developing nation earn their money from the tourism industry.
Furthermore
, foreign tourists contribute to the economy of
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ost country with the money they spend in certain ways
such
 as by buying some goods and products, transportation and
accomodation
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accommodation
accommodating
. From the aforementioned, I draw out the conclusion that
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even though
 there is no doubt that travelling has multifarious advantages for individuals or societies,
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one should not
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 his/her own heritage. By and large, it is a
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positive
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ig planet.
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