Young people say that travelling to different countries benefits them and the society. Do you agree or disagree. Give your opinion

In

this

modern era, globetrotting among young generations become more popular from time to time. It is

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undebatable

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that

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trend of travelling in

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global village has

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ositive influence on both societies as well as

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outh population. I strongly concur with

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ideology and

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my viewpoint in the following paragraphs. To commence with, there are many

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tourism that provide benefits among youth.

Firstly

, there are numerous educational and job

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opportunities

to the students in the various parts of the world.

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development is helpful for their career growth or even they can pursue their avocations. To elucidate,

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in spite

of choosing professional jobs

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hysician, engineer or lawyer ,they can doctorate in skilled trades

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as chefs, photographers,

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lectrician with their best interest .

Moreover

, in my viewpoint, while travelling in foreign countries, adults come across

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ide variety of cultural exchange that

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broaden their horizons and develop

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that is

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a great achievement.

Further

reinforcing my viewpoint,

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oyage has greater influence among societies all over the world.

Initially

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ourism industry provides wages to hundreds of thousands of people ergo to rapidly rise in

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lobal journey by the hoards of people.

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, 15% of

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opulation in developing nation earn their money from the tourism industry.

Furthermore

, foreign tourists contribute to the economy of

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ost country with the money they spend in certain ways

such

as by buying some goods and products, transportation and

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accommodation

accommodating

. From the aforementioned, I draw out the conclusion that

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even though

there is no doubt that travelling has multifarious advantages for individuals or societies,

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one should not

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his/her own heritage. By and large, it is a

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positive

development to be a part of

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ig planet.