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Nowadays some people prefer staying single. What is your opinion?

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In today's modern world, people's way of living has been changed to a great extent. Earlier, everyone preferred to have a family, but in contemporary society, people chose to spend time alone. In my opinion, every
person
 needs a partner to spend his
life
 with. The essay will discuss
further
 views.
Firstly
, it is important to have a counterpart to support you in
life
. A human being may require care of another being at some point of
life
. There are moments when a human is emotionally or physically down and could not discuss the feelings with friends or parents, to have your better-half at that time might make the situation a lot easier to get through. For an instance, a
person
 has some problems at work and after a hard day if he has someone to express his opinions to it might make him more relaxed and stressfree.
Secondly
, for a single character being alone may seem to be the right decision at
first
, but eventually, they start to feel lonely. When a
person
 would not find someone to share his happiness and sorrows, he may go into depression, that time makes him understand the value of having a
life
 partner. At some point of age, an individual could wish care of somebody, that's when he calls for a family.
For example
, when a
person
 is old he might demand his children to share his burdens and hold him up. In conclusion, even though, it might appear a good idea to lead a single
life
, but everyone wants another soul to have his back.
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