Nowadays more people get married to someone of a different culture than they ever did. Why is this happening? Discuss both benefits and demerits of this trend.

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the concept to find a lover does not has restrictions according to religion, colour, language, or beliefs how was in the past.
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several merits in order to rich their traditions and social skills, there is
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isk of dealing with uncomfortable situations which will be developed in
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essay. The concept of globalization has sparked different changes in the people
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ive. In terms of relationships, technology and the possibility that people can travel more than a few years ago allow that more couples find their fiances in other countries. It is more common to see couples with different backgrounds
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the world.
This
is extremely beneficial in order to foster cultural interchanges and
also
build more cosmopolitan cities.
Besides
, children from
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kind of relationships
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perceive
different benefits of these marriages, children can learn two
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languages
which is useful and demanded in these days.
Secondly
, families enrich their traditions and family activities.
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, in terms of meals, the family have more options of dishes with different flavours and history.
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, the main merit of these relationships with different cultures is the understanding of respect and admiration of other values, beliefs, and foods.
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diverse issues because
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misunderstanding problems or cultural clashes. It is difficult to deal
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in a new culture. In many cases, women have to learn a new language to improve their communication skills with their partner. In other examples, women
also
have to change their religion or the manner that their dress in the most extreme cases. According to the
last
survey of a relationship app call Tinder, in Australia,
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67% of couples
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from different nations break up for adaptation issues. The psychologist Mariam Sharp says that it is hard for these couples
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atch in
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aspect of their
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because the way of both see their
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is quite vary
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from influences of their home environment. In conclusion, there are more craze of people find their orange half in other country or city for the new changes of the world and the power of technology
This
can bring many benefits in order to understand other cultures,
however
, at the same time, if the relationships do not deal well with some
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issues
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a nightmare.
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