Nowadays more people get married to someone of a different culture than they ever did. Why is this happening? Discuss both benefits and demerits of this trend.
Multicultural couples the concept to find a lover does not has restrictions according to religion, colour, language, or beliefs how was in the past. diverse issues because misunderstanding problems or cultural clashes. It is difficult to deal and be
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, families enrich their traditions and family activities. Linking Words
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, in terms of meals, the family have more options of dishes with different flavours and history. Linking Words
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, the main merit of these relationships with different cultures is the understanding of respect and admiration of other values, beliefs, and foods.
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