People’s lives are now surrounded by advertisements. This affects what people consider important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people say culture

tradition

is destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourist others say

this

is the only way to save those traditions to discuss both views and give your opinion. it cannot be denied that cultural

tradition

works as a backbone for every country. a segment of society believes that

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cultural

tradition

has demolished after use for money-making an

attraction

for

tourism

whereas other think that a

tradition

can only save after making

attraction

.I will believe my point in

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pcoming paragraph before reach the conclusion.

to begin

with ,cultural

tradition

playing a crucial role in every person life. without traditional and cultural life of individuals are incomplete some people believe that

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earlier people celebrate cultural traditions for the main purpose ,while in

this

contemporary Era people used their

tradition

as

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ttraction for

tourism

.

for instance

, the economy is playing a vital role everywhere no doubt

that is

very important so culture

tradition

used as money-making . all countries decorate the malls, shops, parks ,and roads on their special traditions just for

tourism

attractions they know very well, travellers will come by the

attraction

that will help to increase the economy of the state.

thus

, traditions are not

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ame as earlier.

on the other hand

, cultural

tradition

should be saved from

generation

to

generation

some people say that

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with the

attraction

of

tourism

people can save their

tradition

very carefully

for example

, in

this

technological Era people are very busy with their hectic life schedule some time they do not want to celebrate their special traditions owing to lack of attractions .

attraction

always enhance The curiosity and beauty

also

when decoration will be present

then

tourism

and country people come to celebrate cultural traditions with full of happiness .

therefore

,

tourism

attraction

is very helpful to run the culture

generation

to

generation

. In conclusion

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when

tourism

would come

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that will help to increase the reputation of the country and

also

provide

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ivelihood to

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ocal artist.