It was predicted that people in the 21st century would have much more free time than in the past. To what extent has this prediction come true?

In the advance technology era, much of
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orks have been done by cutting-edge technologies devices and machines. Some people maintain that with the advancement and convenience in following generations will lead them with spare time for their personal activities.
Nevertheless
,
this
progress has made human invested more time as far as motivation and finance are concerned. On the one side, thanks to the proliferation of modern technology have provided humanity with easier and faster communication and direction tools. Network companies have easily available made communication with some click and press of buttons.
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, with the widely covered up of highspeed internet connection, people can do
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irtual meeting or multitasking at anywhere or anytime within a few seconds.
Thus
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convenience is not only enhanced human working performance
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but
also
help people to save more time for other leisure activities. On the flip side, the fact the increase in longevity of human has
also
been achieved by the advanced technologies.
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the result in more living population, more keen competition in
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ob market, shelters, foods.
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, today, there are several people applying to the same position or job in a company
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compares with a few decades ago.
Furthermore
, the globalization is open more opportunities for individuals to gain more practical knowledge to adapt and develop their career. Thereby, the youngsters and working-class should spend their unsocial hours on update themselves with new courses
such
as global market, digital content and marketing, international languages,…
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list is endless. To sum up, despite the convenient and comfortable of what advanced technology bring about human beings, it can be strongly affirmed that people in modernization era have fewer leisure times rather than the previous generations do.
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