Some people believe that watching TV is good and makes life more enjoyable; others, however, think it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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of the most conspicuous trends in today’s world is a colossal upsurge in thinking of Television. There is widespread worry that it will lead to a deluge of problems.

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, I do not entirely accept

this

, and I will explain the reasons in the coming paragraphs. There are many arguments in

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of my stance. The

first

dominant is that Television helps individuals to interconnect with

todays

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today's

today

' world with the help of social media or news. Apart from

this

, thanks to the full range of advantages it offers, not only can

one

benefit more when it comes to being useful, but they can

also

enhance the productivity and quality of their lives with much ease, efficacy, and convenience. All these merits stand

one

in good stead as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence are concerned. Another crucial aspect of the propositions mentioned above is that it is likely

one

help thrive and excel in varied fields.

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, only when

one

follows

such

a system, they can

also

broaden their horizon,

thus

learning

such

essential attributes responsibility, dedication, and perseverance. Television

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ood source of entertainment

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for example

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children

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loves

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to play games as well as watch movies which helps to make

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their

life more enjoyable.

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, it is apparent why many are in

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to use television in

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aily curriculum. After pondering over a great deal of thought and deliberation I have concluded that the benefits of

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notion are indeed too great to ignore.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

relaxation
entertainment
unwind
diverse tastes
documentaries
educational programs
excessive
physical activity
social interaction
inappropriate content
selective
moderated
leisure time
pursuing hobbies
engaging
fulfilling
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