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Some people believe that watching TV is good and makes life more enjoyable; others, however, think it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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One
 of the most conspicuous trends in today’s world is a colossal upsurge in thinking of Television. There is widespread worry that it will lead to a deluge of problems.
However
, I do not entirely accept
this
, and I will explain the reasons in the coming paragraphs. There are many arguments in
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 of my stance. The
first
 dominant is that Television helps individuals to interconnect with
todays
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today's
today
' world with the help of social media or news. Apart from
this
, thanks to the full range of advantages it offers, not only can
one
 benefit more when it comes to being useful, but they can
also
 enhance the productivity and quality of their lives with much ease, efficacy, and convenience. All these merits stand
one
 in good stead as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence are concerned. Another crucial aspect of the propositions mentioned above is that it is likely
one
 help thrive and excel in varied fields.
Besides
, only when
one
 follows
such
 a system, they can
also
 broaden their horizon,
thus
 learning
such
 essential attributes responsibility, dedication, and perseverance. Television
also
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ood source of entertainment
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for example
,
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children
children's
childrens
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loves
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 to play games as well as watch movies which helps to make
thier
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their
 life more enjoyable.
Hence
, it is apparent why many are in
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 to use television in
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aily curriculum. After pondering over a great deal of thought and deliberation I have concluded that the benefits of
this
 notion are indeed too great to ignore.
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