"Prevention is better than cure." Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree.

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History has shown numerous situations where many pandemics are controlled by preventing them.
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, I strongly agree with the given statement that controlling the attack of a disease is always better than treating it after it enters a body because getting a vaccine for a virus involves a lot of finance and time. In the current essay, I would elaborate my opinion with relevant examples. To commence with, controlling a pandemic is somewhat easy compared with the loss we see after it attacks a huge population.
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, taking relevant measures before it becomes contagious is always a better idea .
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, curing a disease is a matter of money and time.
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, we can not expect the exact date of the vaccine and in the meanwhile,it may take many lives.
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, before a vaccine came for polio , it made many kids handicapped.As a consequence, many individuals are suffering throughout their lives.
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, if the virus or bacteria is new to the world ,
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we can not even know how to start the medication.
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is the reason why 'prevention is better than cure', is the only mantra to follow in those situations.
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, in the case of COVID, it is being said that staying away from the virus is easy than curing it.
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wearing masks and using sanitizers is being advertised repeatedly by the Government. To conclude, observing the current situation which the whole world is facing and
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eying on the history ,I strongly believe that staying away from the disease would be simpler than treating it after getting in touch with it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proactive
  • preventive measures
  • lifestyle diseases
  • public health
  • healthcare expenditure
  • cost-effective
  • chronic conditions
  • early detection
  • immunization
  • health promotion
  • risk factors
  • non-communicable diseases
  • disease surveillance
  • preventive diagnostics
  • health literacy
  • universal healthcare
  • primary prevention
  • secondary prevention
  • tertiary prevention
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