People are increasingly becoming concerned about protecting the environment from pollution caused by fossil fuels. Much of the pollution comes from car engines and some have suggested electric cars could be the solution. Do you think electric cars could be better for the environment? What are their advantages and disadvantages?

One of the main reasons for global warming is the uncontrolled
pollution
. Most of
this
is related to the fuel from cars, and as the public grows
wary
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of their surroundings some suggest that the solution to
this
problem is shifting to electric cars.
This
essay will discuss that while
this
maybe
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a solution to save the environment it does have a few positive and negative aspects to it.  The two main benefits of choosing electric cars over mechanical cars are conservation of fuel and reducing the pollutants emitted in the air. By reducing the use of fossil fuel we can not only save natural resources but
also
reduce the
pollution
which
cause
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health hazards. Since 2010 most companies have increased their manufacture of electric cars as opposed to the time before that, as they say
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the sales have increased because customers are now more worried about their environment.
Therefore
positive attributes
such
as saving petrol and less
pollution
is
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making people change their preference towards their choice of cars.  Unfortunately
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though,
such
vehicles have some disadvantages like the cost associated and space for battery charges. As the technology used in these cars is advanced, it is understood that the expenses are
also
more,
additionally
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these automobiles need to be charged at a charging station installed
near by
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. Most people who can afford these cars live in the cities which have limited spaces, it is seldom easy to fit a charging booth in your building premises, so owners have to drive far away.
Such
liabilities are the reason people have still not shifted entirely to electric cars. As people become more cautious about their environment their choices are driven by
a
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conscience.
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essay discussed that though there are shortcomings of
such
vehicles they do not outweigh the advantages when it impacts the surrounding. In my opinion, reducing the
pollution
and conservation of any naturally existing source is good reason to believe that electric cars are beneficial to us.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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