These days many advertisements are aimed at children. What effect do you think they have? Should advertising to children be more controlled and regulated?

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I have completed the analysis for
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issue and it seems like problem from the PLS side. I have reviewed the
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and found Mailing address state and zip mentioned as IN (International) and 46033.
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details are incorrect. I have communicated user with the correct combination which is required to open the document. @Dipesh : Please assign someone to check why the eSignature
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have those incorrect details. Basically we have to check why our envelop creation job generated the
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, for
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policy, with incorrect Mailing address details. I have completed the initial analysis by running the SP (attached with
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email) which is responsible for the
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details and surprisingly 2 records are being fetched for
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policy/edition/transnum. Please investigate why two rows are coming by the SP (attached query) for
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policy. Ideally,
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row (state In and Zip 46033) should not come. I have checked with Blessy and still she do not have any update on
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. Once I will get any update from Blessy, I will share the details. Roger already provided the clean up script and the impacted policies for
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issue, so we need to prepare the clean up template based on Roger details. Please take all the policies which shared by Roger and fetch the other clean up necessary details. In the attached excel I am not seeing those details. Good Afternoon. Yes, you are correct. We need UES to be restarted after server reboot on every Sunday evening after reboot and yes, it is a weekly activity not daily.
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