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Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometimes starting from the age of five or six, right up until the age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

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Nowadays, children are forced to do so many exams in their school
life
, and sometimes for a very early age, and that provide a large debate. Some people believe it is the best way to know the
students
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 ability.
However
, some others think it is very stressful and it could be sometime unfair.
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what I think is right. One of the most convincing opinions against
this
 huge number of exams for children is that exams are not always fair. Some students feel very nervous during the
exam
 and sometimes freeze even if the student was prepared very well. So that means they are not suitable for everyone.
Moreover
, exams are very stressful, which leads the children often to get sick during the examination period. Another opinion against the idea that most exams in children
life
 are useless. There
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 a real benefit in reality. They are only to teach students how to memorise. So it is exactly like record a few days before the
exam
,
then
 play during the
exam
,
then
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life
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life
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such
 as university or work. One the other hand, a strong opinion in favour say that exams are the best way to know the strong and weak point in
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student knowledge. So that it gives the teachers a tool to
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 children level during the course.
For example
, every week in my school, there is
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xam for the new students to know which class or level they should join.
In addition
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ery strong motivation for children, which encourage them to get
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higher and higher marks. So they know that
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 the more they study for exams, the more they would achieve.
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it is fair because all students do the same
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the same time, no matter of their conditions rich or poor, from well-known family or not. So
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tudent who prepares well will get
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ood score.
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