Learning to play team sports is an important part of a child’s education. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is known that sport’s

education

is really necessary for

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hild’s development. When children play

team

sports they improve their physical and mental health,

also

communication and social skills. I am totally agreed that

this

learning should be in their educational life. There is no doubt that when children play in

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eam sport they are learning to help each other.

For example

, if we look at a game of football, we will see as each participant makes a lot of effort to get a goal and a win in general. When children play

team

sports they learn to

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between them,

therefore

, when they grow up they will work in a

team

without difficulties. Needless to say,

team

sports have advantages for children in their future life,

for instance

,

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hild

whom

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played

team

sports perhaps does not be

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.

Further

, if children in their lives use sports as part of

education

, perhaps

this

type of

education

will help them make a choice in their future profession.

In addition

, physical activity, like

education

, helps children learn the school curriculum.

In other words

, children

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do not play

team

sports have low marks, since their brains may not be used to cope with

such

loads, there is no logical thinking and fear of responsibility prevents them from making the right decision. In conclusion, I would like to highlight that

team

sports as part of

education

in child’s

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are very significant as in childhood as in adulthood. When children take part

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team

sports, they learn communication

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each other.