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You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you are selling describe the furniture suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture

#furniture #friend #date
Dear Rahul I hope
this
 letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you about some furniture which I want to sell. Well, as you know I always wanted to pursue my higher education in Canada and luckily my visa got approved recently.
Due to
 that, I have to move to Canada by the end of
this
 month.
Moreover
, I am living alone in my rental apartment and I have a few furniture products which you might like for your home. Let me explain my products in more detail, basically, I have one nearly brand new computer desk which I recently bought for my working setup. Another piece of furniture is 2 office chairs which I like very much because of their comfort and reliability.
In addition
, I have one cabinet to showcase medals, trophies and photo frames. To be very honest I am in a rush as my flight is scheduled for next Friday, that's why If you are interested In it please come by In two days. So I have enough time to transport
this
 product to your place. Awaiting your reply eagerly. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours Lovingly Biren.
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task achievement
While your letter is very clear, you could add more specific details about why your friend might like the furniture. This would make your task response even stronger.
coherence cohesion
To improve coherence further, work on smoother transitions between paragraphs. For example, use linking phrases such as 'Additionally' or 'Moreover' to connect ideas seamlessly.
task achievement
Your letter addresses all parts of the task clearly and provides specific details about the furniture you are selling, which enhances the task achievement score.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and add a personal touch to the letter, contributing positively to cohesion and coherence.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph handles a single idea, making the letter structured and easy to follow for the reader.
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