27. Some people believe that the government should financially support retired people. Others feel that those who have retired should pay to support themselves. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There has long been a heated debate about whether should the

government

aid financially retired people or they should pay for themselves. In my own perspective, I strongly agree with the former view that the retirement benefit should be awarded to people based on their field of service. On the one hand, people, who out of working age, are not enough energy and health status/conditions to earn a living or survive in society if they are in poverty with only minimal range of

pension

scheme

or limited the profession.

For example

, many blue-collar workers in developing countries are unable to find a part-time job or menial tasks due to the reduction of physical and

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.

Therefore

, they need to receive the

government

's support to find out a suitable job so as to keep up with the fast pace of

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odern lifestyle. On the flip side, there

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several people comment that pensioners should self-payment for their basic and casual demands by getting

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mount of money from

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ension,

nevertheless

,

this

thought is not completely true. The fact that the

amount

of

pension

scheme

is inadequate to maintain pensioners’ daily life in some circumstance.

For instance

, the

pension

scheme

of retired labours in Vietnam is quite low, it is only half of

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egional fundament salary. With low-income,

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old

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have

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to

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overtime to put the food into their mouth and renting a roof.

Thus

, the

government

should support out-of-work people continually/constantly to remain their daily life with a suitable

amount

of money monthly. To sum up, despite the fact that retired people can

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a small

amount

of money from

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ension

scheme

,

however

, they still need financial

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from the

government

to release from shoulder the heavy burden of

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a living, in the period of time they deserve to retire and enjoy their label of

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ruit.